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Falling by Corpse-boy Falling by Corpse-boy
another peace! yyayy this one is interesting because i used both Sai and coral painter 12
this one is of Danny or "blackvirus" who seems to be falling, and all of his back claws are reaching out to grab or stab Xp
HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT! also some feed back would be nice :3
this was some how inspired by [link]
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:iconblacksnowwonderland:
Glad to see another lovely piece from ya Ray. Overall, this sums up pretty well, but hey, everyone can improve, so let's get on to the actual critiquing part of this.

The perspective is pretty good on this. You can definitely tell that you're looking at a figure those falling back. One part that gets me a little is the angle of the foot that comes up the farthest, it seems just a tad bit off. The angling of his hands does look believable though.

As for the falling motion itself, the shredded bits of his cloak as well as his hair could stand to give a bit more of an illusion of movement, they seem a bit still for someone who's falling in space.

Now, on to the lighting and shading! As usual, you've done a great job with giving a light source and showing how it's interacting with the background. However, it doesn't seem to reach his claws and the scythe-like appendages, they have an almost total lack in shading while the rest of his body does, but this doesn't stand out to much in anything other than the hand that's closest to the viewer. Seeing as it's so close, you'd have an opportunity to be able to give it more detail, such as highlights where the light would be reflecting off of it.

Overall though, I'd like to say again that you've done a pretty good job with this! Keep it up Ray, I'm looking forward to seeing more from you. I hope this helped!
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mythicaldraw101 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
now I'm done
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Nightynight1 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh sooo magical
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NuMetalWolf Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Again with the scythes! Haha.. xD
Oh yeah, *spoiler* the green scythe-like aliens in the reactor core from Half Life. Lolz :p
Just kidding, i loved this style you've put on him. I see the laser coming out from his eye. And his hair makes him look a bit more sketched, a little. Reminds me of a Japanese figure, specially with his mouth covered. It looks pretty cool.. :meow:
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sadaokitten Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Beautifully done, man.
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The-Lost-Hope Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow now that's a lot of claws. Awesome. I like the angle you drew him on.
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Onikage108 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
Um . . . who exactly?
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Arthusbuttkick Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very nice. :)
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RPbogal Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Coolness :3
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Vladimir-Valentine Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I really like the perspective of this and how it clearly shows that he's falling, but it seems a little unclear into what he's falling into, maybe something to add into the background might help, not sure. But again, you can tell he's falling and the proportion of the limbs are correct too ^_^

I think the only thing that kind of bugs me is that his hair seems a little too "stiff". His hair should be blowing around his face a bit more or moving to add that extra aspect of falling.

Great work :3 hope that helped a little
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EhX-KoR Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Dide this is just amazing
just asdfghjkl~
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